Storyboard edits

Script Update: New Changes Made

We changed some of the words and made the scenes a bit scarier. For example, Ethan’s lines are shorter and creepier to make him seem strange. Here’s a part of the new script:

Lila: (nervous) Are you sure you’re okay?

Ethan: (voice low) Sometimes… we don’t see what’s coming.

New Storyboard: What We Changed and Why

Scene 1: The Meeting

• Camera Shots: We used over-the-shoulder shots when Lila and Ethan talk to feel like we’re part of the conversation.

• Sounds: We added birds chirping and leaves rustling at first, but these sounds slowly go away as things get creepy.

• Why We Changed It: We wanted to make it feel friendly at first, then slowly scary.

Scene 2: The Change

• Camera Effects: We made the camera shake a little when Ethan’s eyes turn black to show something is really wrong.

• Sounds: We added a low, spooky sound when the lights flicker.

• Why We Changed It: To make the scene feel more like a scary movie.

Scene 3: The Reveal

• Shots: We used a slow zoom-in on Lila’s face when she gets scared instead of a wide shot.

• Why We Changed It: To show her fear and make the audience feel scared too.

We also made a new storyboard with pictures and more details about the sounds, camera moves, and what the characters say. Check it out and tell us what you think!

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Initial storyboard

Scene 1: The Meeting 1. Shot 1 - Establishing Shot • Camera Angle: Wide-angle, slightly elevated. • Audio Notes: Distant city noise, rustling leaves, soft chatter. • Transition: Fade in. • Graphics/Text: “A Quiet Evening” 2. Shot 2 - Medium Shot • Camera Angle: Medium shot, straight-on. • Audio Notes: Footsteps approaching, pages flipping. • Transition: Cut to next shot. 3. Shot 3 - Close-Up • Camera Angle: Close-up, slight low angle. • ...

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Initial script

Setting: A quiet city park at dusk. The streetlights flicker to life as the sun dips below the skyline, casting long shadows across the walking paths. Leaves rustle in the cool evening breeze, and the distant hum of traffic blends with the occasional laughter of parkgoers. A wooden bench sits near a still lake, surrounded by tall oak trees swaying gently in the wind. Scene 1: The Meeting (A golden glow from the sunset reflects off the water. LILA, a young woman in her mid-20s, sits on a worn wooden bench, flipping through a well-loved book. ETHAN, about the same age, approaches with a hesitant but charming smile, holding two cups of coffee.) Ethan: (clears his throat, shifting on his feet) Hey. Sorry to bug you, but… is that The Wanderer’s Tale? Lila: (looks up, surprised) Yeah. You know it? Ethan: (grinning) Know it? I’ve read it three times. It’s a masterpiece. Lila: (raises an eyebrow, intrigued) Most people haven’t even heard of it. Ethan: Well, most people are missi...

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